I am a Year 8 learner in Room 2 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Ms. Tapuke.
Tuesday, 21 June 2016
Thursday, 16 June 2016
Batman Superhero Comic
Ash Batman from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.
There is going to be 2 robots attacking the world and only one Batman that's saves the day and there is going to be some thing like a rock that is going to destroy the world. But Batman will save them all.
There is going to be 2 robots attacking the world and only one Batman that's saves the day and there is going to be some thing like a rock that is going to destroy the world. But Batman will save them all.
Wednesday, 15 June 2016
yum yum writing with Mr Baxs
When I went into the class I so the box that was not there late week but now there is a box and it got same thing in it so I should just wait untill Mr Baxendine tell us.
My friend Kennan got a bandanna and he put it around my face and I could’t see one thing but But then he gave me same thing and he told me to drink it and so I did.
Friday, 10 June 2016
Ash Jessica in the dark
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Thursday, 2 June 2016
narrative will save her
Will He Save Her?
Narrative Writing
WALT: write a descriptive narrative (paints a picture in the reader's mind)
Use the picture on the left as your story starter or even your story finisher. The picture could depict what is happening in the beginning of your story. You would then describe the events from the picture then tell your audience what happens next.
Or if you’re using the picture as your story ending, what are the events that happened before this falling scene.
Or if you’re using the picture as your story ending, what are the events that happened before this falling scene.
Plan:
Planning:
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Are you using the picture as the beginning or ending of your story?
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begining
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Hero:
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batman
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Villain:
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joker
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Other Characters (if any):
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chas
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Setting: (Where?)
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On the high tower
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Problem: (What goes wrong?)
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Joker throw
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Solution: (How is the problem fixed?)
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bat man get her
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Start Writing Here: Batman was waiting for Joker to do same thing like robbe the shop or like kill them so and then he saw joker and he was with a girl and her name was Chas and then Joker said to Joker that you have to come and fight me said Joker all I will push her we are on the high tower you bester be fast because I am giving you 2 minut so you best be fast as you can or I will posh her and when she full’s it going to be fun when I posh her and then Batman said to Joker don’t push her all I will kill you and then it will be the end of you okay then come said Joker I am coming okay and then Batman got in his car and went to the high tower Joker was still waiting for Batman and then he was at the back of Joker then he turned around Joker said don’t move or I will push her okay don’t move one best okay okay now let her go no what you said If I come so I came so let her go okay so don’t push her all I will go after her don’t you now I got a car that can fly do you now that I put a bum didn't you see it and then Batman throw his bat thing and it go hem in the head then the Joker got made so he throw Chase and then he went for a jump and then she got near the
Ground and then Batman was getting to near her and then he got her the end
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