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Once upon a time me and my sibling where going to the beach on a sunny day. But then we so a pirate ship and there was real pirates on the ship the pirates fear was sharks.

But then we so a griffin and we ask if we could ride it and the griffin said yes.But then we so a pirate betray his own team and headed this way to kill us .

But then the griffin gave a suite of armour and it fillet like Destruction but then I so a big gun next to me and I picked it up and aim it right a the pirate ship and fired it then we lived happy every after.