Introduction: Hook, the 4 W’s
Paragraph 1: What is the Manaiakalani Film Festival?
Paragraph 2: Where did we go and what did we do?
Paragraph 3: What was your favourite movie and why?
Paragraph 3: What was your favourite movie and why?
Conclusion: What did you think about the whole experience? Any final thoughts?
Start writing here….
Last week wedneday the half of pt england where going to sylvia park for the film festival and the other half hade to stay so they could watch there own video they made.
After the other half came back from sylvia park Mrs scanlan said that you only have 5 minuts before the bus starts to go without us after we ate our mornning tea we all went into for lines after we went into for lines then we started to walk to the bus when we got in the bus I went to the back with all my friends andwe were sing a lot of song.
When we got to sylvia park we wentinto the movies andwe watched for an hole 1 hour after our 1 hour was finish we went out sid and lined up into two lines and got ready to go into to the bus when we got in the bus we started to leave and whenwe got there we ate our launch and went outside to play for a little a bit then when we got back we got ready to go home. The End
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